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Monday, June 11, 2018

THE NARRATIVE/PITCH

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As promised below is a list of titles  I'm pondering over along with a brief synopsis of the story with an underlying pitch. I'd like to hear your comments on how I'm doing.




THIS IS THE STORY OF A CAUCASIAN WOMAN WHOSE ANCESTRY DEFIES YET DEFINES THE COLOR OF HER SKIN. LEONA’S DIRECT BLOODLINE IS VERY DIVERSE, YET IT’S AS IF FATE OR PERHAPS HER EXTENDED BLOODLINE THAT HAS DECIDED HER APPEARANCE.


THE FIRST TWO STORIES WILL BE TOLD BY LEONA , AS LEFT IN A MANUSCRIPTS WRITTEN BY BEATRIX COBB. LEONA IS CHOSEN BECAUSE OF HER UNIQUE ABILITY OF ODD.


NARRATIVE:

HELLO MY NAME IS LEONA COBB-TOAD. MY MARRIED NAME I WILL NOT DISCLOSE AT THIS TIME. I AM THE STEPSISTER OF MY MOTHER.  I’D BE HONORED IF YOU WILL ACCEPT MY INVITATION INTO MY LIFE’S JOURNEY. I'M ALSO A WRITER AND AS I STARTED WRITING MY STORY I REALIZED THAT I’D BE WRITING ONLY PART OF A STORY, MY AFTER THOUGHT WAS HOW UNKIND IT WOULD BE TO DEPRIVE YOU OF KNOWING IN WHOLE WHO I AM AND HOW I CAME TO BE ME. SO WITHOUT FURTHER ADO LET ME FIRST INTRODUCE TO YOU MY GRANDMOTHER WHOSE HUSBAND IS MY FATHER, MEET MAGGIE AND LEON COBB. NEXT MY MOTHER BEATRIX COBB-TOAD- SOBURDRUNC. 


BELOW ARE POSSIBLE TITLES OF THE LEONA STORY
                             
DO NOT JUDGE ME 

MY BLOOD RUNS DEEP

THIS IS MY BLOOD

THE VEINS OF MY BLOOD

I AM MY PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE

I AM MY GREAT-MOTHER’S DAUGHTER

LEONA


SCRIPTED NOVELS:

1) MEET LEON AND MAGGIE COBB   Novel is being edited.

2) BEATRIX COBB        Novel Started  the link to the backstory above on page (2) 

3) LEONA                    Novel Storyboarded


4) THE SOUBORDRUNC’S Scripted TV Series


©JUNE 2018 ALL RIGHTS RESERVED Renee Zachary-TheseTwoHands

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