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Wednesday, June 13, 2018

& Now I Lay It Down feat. ReSa



Enjoy! This Is another side of my writing skills. Songwriter, Singer. Song is written, composed and sung by me. Thank you for listening.

Monday, June 11, 2018

THE NARRATIVE/PITCH

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As promised below is a list of titles  I'm pondering over along with a brief synopsis of the story with an underlying pitch. I'd like to hear your comments on how I'm doing.




THIS IS THE STORY OF A CAUCASIAN WOMAN WHOSE ANCESTRY DEFIES YET DEFINES THE COLOR OF HER SKIN. LEONA’S DIRECT BLOODLINE IS VERY DIVERSE, YET IT’S AS IF FATE OR PERHAPS HER EXTENDED BLOODLINE THAT HAS DECIDED HER APPEARANCE.


THE FIRST TWO STORIES WILL BE TOLD BY LEONA , AS LEFT IN A MANUSCRIPTS WRITTEN BY BEATRIX COBB. LEONA IS CHOSEN BECAUSE OF HER UNIQUE ABILITY OF ODD.


NARRATIVE:

HELLO MY NAME IS LEONA COBB-TOAD. MY MARRIED NAME I WILL NOT DISCLOSE AT THIS TIME. I AM THE STEPSISTER OF MY MOTHER.  I’D BE HONORED IF YOU WILL ACCEPT MY INVITATION INTO MY LIFE’S JOURNEY. I'M ALSO A WRITER AND AS I STARTED WRITING MY STORY I REALIZED THAT I’D BE WRITING ONLY PART OF A STORY, MY AFTER THOUGHT WAS HOW UNKIND IT WOULD BE TO DEPRIVE YOU OF KNOWING IN WHOLE WHO I AM AND HOW I CAME TO BE ME. SO WITHOUT FURTHER ADO LET ME FIRST INTRODUCE TO YOU MY GRANDMOTHER WHOSE HUSBAND IS MY FATHER, MEET MAGGIE AND LEON COBB. NEXT MY MOTHER BEATRIX COBB-TOAD- SOBURDRUNC. 


BELOW ARE POSSIBLE TITLES OF THE LEONA STORY
                             
DO NOT JUDGE ME 

MY BLOOD RUNS DEEP

THIS IS MY BLOOD

THE VEINS OF MY BLOOD

I AM MY PAST PRESENT AND FUTURE

I AM MY GREAT-MOTHER’S DAUGHTER

LEONA


SCRIPTED NOVELS:

1) MEET LEON AND MAGGIE COBB   Novel is being edited.

2) BEATRIX COBB        Novel Started  the link to the backstory above on page (2) 

3) LEONA                    Novel Storyboarded


4) THE SOUBORDRUNC’S Scripted TV Series


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Sunday, June 10, 2018

WRITING WRITING WRITING


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Greetings Everyone!

January of 2016 me and my vivid imagination wrote a backstory of woman's life journey whom I thought to be fantastic yet unremarkable. So I posted  "In My Mind Beatrix Cobb on my Blogspot and received great encouragement through reviews in the order which I received them posted below from writers who I consider remarkable in their respective positions, in addition to my husband, family and friends.  Shortly after good advice, searching for scriptwriters with absolutely no budget along with the inspiration of Quentin Tarantino's Hateful 8 and Ben Affleck's Live By Night of which he wrote, directs and acts, I decided who better to tell my story than moi. After all I have a substantial degree of writing experience. I graduated high school as an English Major having excellent Typing, Shorthand skills and a Commercial Diploma. I continued my college education majoring in Secretarial Sciences.  I'm a Lyricist who has written many songs and a self proclaimed Author who has also written one published and three unpublished children's books under the pseudonym of Aunt Naye. https://youtu.be/S7pBa9vMCrw  .  June of 2016 I started writing my first scripted novel titled Beatrix Cobb, well into the third chapter I felt that Beatrix's character was extraordinary yet full of unexplained substantial substance leaving behind too many unanswered why's. After some pondering I felt as a writer I must go back a generation in order to justify those why's.  So I begin my saga with the story of her parents completely clarifying her character and creating another scripted novel: Meet Maggie and Leon Cobb.  This novel consists of fifteen chapters ending with a cliffhanger that leads to the now second story Beatrix Cobb  also ending with a cliffhanger that leads in to another scripted novel or a long standing series for television. Anyways the story starts with a short narrative by an incredible Cobb descendant who's searching for answers she will find in her mother's/stepsisters manuscript that she guards with her life.

Tomorrow I will post the narrative.


1) Anthony Wilson: Journalist and News Reporter for Fox News in the state of NC
 
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That's a fascinating, complex backstory! Depending upon your production budget and/or the studio that produces it, there may be need to edit some of it. The longer the background, the higher the costs if you try to include it all.
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2) Stephanie Palmer:  Consultant, Author and Screenwriter
     Gave it a thumbs up and quotes "Great Story!"
     of which the next reply comes from.



3) Associates of a renowned Filmmaker.
    

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Wednesday, August 9, 2017

TYLER PERRY GETS DEEP


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Getting pun and entertainment out of the way, that elevator has been HOT! Lmao. Cat fights and the Homo's whoremones are raging. I'm loving it!!!!! Tyler Perry you're insane.

Tyler I love how you've broadened the scope of the underlying antics in politics, scandal and corruption, then too including the mob exampling how deep in our society and government it does exist. Keeping in mind that our government and all the pawns who make up the government; is a designed and controlled system better still a mechanism.  Most people are aware of the rich and powerful and how money talks etc. You've displayed that with Judges Cryer & Harrington, and their wives. However to what extent it seeps the majority are uniformed therefore unaware.

What got my attention was what senator Charles said in last night's episode in his conversation with Candice (not quoting verbatim) but about very powerful people who can make things happen and things disappear too. This happens to be a fact. Also how he was hand picked to be senator, another fact. He asked her who do you know graduates college, and then gets a senate seat? I just hope your viewers are getting this, well a least a few anyways.

I love my country but freedom, democracy and our monetary system, in my opinion are the biggest illusions ever created. I often think of how MLKJr, fought for our civil right to vote which has now been down graded to what is now known as "the popular vote" that has little significance (ha). Henceforth another process created called "electoral votes" which trumps the popular vote. How about that for a smack in the face?., which really "steams my clams."

I've been trying to enlighten (as has others) people for many years who these handful of very powerful people are that control everything. It's not the president, whom many think is, the person in office is merely a pawn. Wake up people enlighten yourselves read, inquire. Also information is being handed to you on a silver platter. Research The Zeigeist Movement and The Venus Project can you say "Exposure"  this is for those who are blinded by the smoke and mirrors. Everything you think you know about our country is an illusion. I will say this Dick Gregory is not crazy lol. Read the Willie Lynch Letter, you can not understand yourselves or even us as a nation of people in entirety until you know where we've all come from. 

Tyler Perry's HAHN is for entertainment purposes only. However for myself as a personal viewer it is my right to perceive it however I choose.

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Sunday, April 9, 2017

Greenleaf: It's Not Just Another Story It's Our History




I write this blog about Greenleaf asking that you not sit in judgment of the characters also not just view as entertainment but to view as our ancestor's and our life's history so that we may better understand one another as a people and have compassion for each other.

Let's start at the beginning, after all the tail can't be straight is the head is crooked. "Dear Ole Daddy! In order to have a better understanding of daddy's behavior ( the head of the family ) I implore you to read Willie Lynch Letter And The Making Of A Slave. It's a thirty page book very short and takes about fifteen minutes to read unless you get trapped trying to wrap your brain around the idea. Afterwards I guarantee  you will fully understand the nature of the negro behavioral patterns. It is my summation and belief that the early Alpha Negro males molested their own man child as a way of control and domination passed down through generations.Therefore as repulsive as it may be don't sit in judgment of dear daddy for not being able to break the chains of bondage.  As for the Negro women they existed mainly for breeding, and the torment they too endured was immeasurable. The women were treated as inferior and had no voice in any matter. So if dear daddy was doing the boy or girl child she'd better look the other way if she wanted to live.

There is no other race on earth that has been detrimentally and infinitely tampered with as the American Negro. Example name one american negro whose traceable bloodline is pure.
Furthermore most american family surnames were that of  slave masters.

For the same reason how christianity is portrayed in the Greenleaf story and is incidentally pretty much the same in the world we live, some years ago I denounced religion and myself as a religious person. I simply state that I'm a BELIEVER and I have accepted Christ Jesus for me nobody else. I also truly believe that in order for us as a race of people to be free from the shackles that bind us to our ancestral past we must first understand in order to then forgive. Remember love does really conquer all.

I will say this: It always amazes me when folk quote parables and bible verses solely to suit their agendas.

Oprah Greenleaf is a force to be reckoned with, and I dare not make light of it! You've out done yourself with this one. It's a wound that still festers to this day affecting countless.

Thanx again for sharing. I simply hope that the world is watching Greenleaf with an open mind and heart.  Dear Oprah I do hope Greenleaf is global and available for viewing in all languages.  In my opinion it's more than worthy of it.

In my family I'm similar to the character you portray,  sister Mavis.

STRICTLY FOR LAUGHS
Lady Mae     strike the L   Shady Mae.



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Tuesday, April 4, 2017

GREENLEAF ( Y ) IS A CROOKED LETTER


In my youthful years I was a very people person one vigorously seeking boundless knowledge yet foremost a deeper understanding of human nature. At a function I was in the company of family,
friends and friends of friends. Among them was a quiet gentleman some would label him odd or eccentric. My spirit lured me into a conversation with him. The worldly and spiritual knowledge he began to share with me was phenomenal. Question, after questions I asked that delighted him in awe, answering with answers that wowed me. After sometime he exhaustedly said speaking in parables he knew i'd comprehend, " listen Y is a crooked letter that goes on and on and on yet we still wonder why." I still continued my quest for answers in life, but life's taught me later years that somethings just are which is what he was in essence saying. You see I understood what he was saying but I didn't believe it. This was over 40 years go, and unknowingly then a major stepping stone in my life's journey.

In one of my blogs I wrote about bringing meaningful television programs back into urban homes something that was wholesome and family oriented that I could watch with my entire family especially my grandchildren. I have two grand daughters who are 5 and 12. I was thinking of a program that focused on dealing with real life family values, failures, triumphs, stigmatizes etc. Oprah Winfrey and team has gracefully done exactly that with Greenleaf. I can't thank her enough.

You see Greenleaf is the mirror image of myself,  my immediate family and my extended family. Free from shame or guilt I can whole heartedly openly admit this. This is the story that I need to share with my grand daughters. Learning them the good, the bad and the ugly of our family history. Also to show them how it plagues, effects and affects other families so that they may be better prepared for life such as it is. Through Greenleaf I can share it in a more relative way. I don't want them to experience this nightmare or become victims as my children did no matter how over protective we as parents think we can be. Although my aka granbies are over 400 miles away and I haven't seen them in 2 years. I'm looking forward to sharing the Greenleaf experience and my experience of our family skeletons with them before I close these eyes. I don't want them to be judgmental something that wasn't instilled in me yet life made me over time. I'm 18 with 43 years of life experience having to regroup. As I continue to grow in wisdom life has taught me contrary to younger beliefs that the only right or wrong that holds any weight in life on earth is that it is wrong to sit in moral judgement of others.  Mom taught me that early in life, she said " don't look down or turn your nose up at people less fortunate than you, that same person may have to give you a drink of water or something to save your life one day."  Of course then those words didn't carry as much weight as they do for me today.

The world is full of sick folk scared by our predeceased and ancestors, and although we may all have different values no one's perfect and no one is exempt.  Perfect, incidentally a word that eludes my vocabulary these days.

I will be blogging Greenleaf and how certain situations has and still is affecting my life. It is well with my soul.

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Saturday, March 18, 2017

WAKE UP! Never Sleep On Tyler Perry

WAKE UP


Just finished watching the mid season finale of HAHN, can you say "knocked my socks off."  It was riveting to say the least. We all know that Tyler Perry is a prolific writer but it takes an extraordinary writer to pull you into a story.  This episode of HAHN sucked me in and held me emotionally captive
all 47 minutes of it. BRAVO

Oh what a treat I had no idea Warlock and Erica were an item although from day A-1, I knew that Erica was envious of Candace didn't realize she was as ruthless, surprisingly though she confirmed my suspicion. However I have to wonder what bad blood is between those two. Coy David turned out to be a real tiger. Katheryn's move was so sweet she must have hired an army of cat burglars to clear the house. The injured Quincy jr.,  broke my heart, I had to snap out of it and remind myself that this is just entertainment. Mitch did hit the nail on the head when Benny said Veronica was crazy then Mitch replied and I quote "They're all crazy" my sentiments exactly lol.

So what now? Could it be that Hanna will get the Cryer's old house or maybe even have a stroke, heart attack from all of the recent events, and become debilitated or die herself?  Will Quincy jr., live or die? If Candace's son lives or dies could this be a turning point in Candace's life?  Wouldn't that be something to see Hanna's and Candace's rolls reversed (woah). What about Jim will he go running to his bastard family Celine and her children he fathered? How about poor little Melissa will she die too or survive and continue to plot to kill Veronica maybe succeeding especially since her father's passing she really has nothing to live for.?  Will Mitch's gangster family become more involved in lieu of the shoot out? What will become of Katheryn? Will Wyatt turn over a new leaf? Who will go to jail for the murder of Quincy? Finally will there be another season of HAHN after this season is over? I think so, but only Tyler Perry knows that!

We'll just have to wait and see, but until then never sleep on Tyler Perry!

On to Greenleaf.


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